Jean Murray Poet Couplet

Into the Blue

Into the blue run me and you.
Naked as seals in the moonlight.

Our first intercourse happened that night.
Into the blue after dancing with you.

On our wedding day, into the blue.
After the sermon, me and you.

Now alone I skinny dip.
Into the blue without you.

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Ken Carroll January 16, 2016 at 1:44 PM Sensual! Thanks for visiting my page. Jean Murray January 16, 2016 at 2:26 PM KEN!!!! Only you would see and admit the sensual in me. I will still never hold a candle to your member!

Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 4:52 PM beautiful but sad Jean I feel blue after reading this:-( hugs Jan xx Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 5:29 PM Good on you Jean:-) Hugs jan xx Jean Murray January 10, 2016 at 5:27 PM Don't be blue Jan. It was I who kicked him out six years ago.

Ilene Bauer January 10, 2016 at 1:09 PM so simple and complex at the same time. i really like this one, jean. killer ending... Jean Murray January 10, 2016 at 5:28 PM All my poems are true stories. I would like someone to skinny dip with. But not my X husband.

Paul Callus January 10, 2016 at 12:38 PM Lovely, yet sad, Jean; written with your usual natural flair. I notice that we both based our entry on the sea...you referring to seals...me to dolphins:) ~ Regards // paul Jean Murray January 10, 2016 at 2:33 PM I did not know about the competition until I read your entry Paul. The big difference is .....you are beside the sea in Malta. No wonder you mention dolphins and I seals.

Dalia Shahein January 10, 2016 at 10:25 AM Beautiful words my dear , loved every line , hugs / / :) dalia Jean Murray January 10, 2016 at 10:27 AM Again, thank you Dalia.

David Fisher January 10, 2016 at 9:27 AM Nice but sort of sad poem, Jean. Hope it does well in contest. Jean Murray January 10, 2016 at 9:43 AM AW....a romantic I see. You do not remember me......DRIVING INSTRUCTER.??