Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

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Into the Badlands

Into the Badlands she rode, with spurs lightning fast.
Her chocolate stallion, her wild companion,
slows in the maco sica, a dry and dusty forecast.
Into the Badlands she rode, with spurs lightning fast.
a slim cigarette and weathered face, built to outlast
a South Dakota storm and browbeat Hell’s canyon.
Into the Badlands she rode, with spurs lightning fast
Her chocolate stallion, her wild companion.

10/26/2020
Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 24 - Triolet
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: INTO THE BADLANDS

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Paige Hind August 16, 2024 at 6:44 PM I loved it- horses are so beautiful to behold.... <3

Caren Krutsinger October 29, 2020 at 4:13 AM This had so much energy I was completely enamored, wishing I had not chosen the same theme! Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM Thank you, Caren!

Paul Callus October 27, 2020 at 1:55 PM An excellent Triolet, Kim. Vivid descriptions and lots of movement give life to your bold words. Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2020 at 2:18 PM Thank you, Paul!

Silent One October 27, 2020 at 6:41 AM That is one great stallion... Great entry for this contest.. Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2020 at 2:18 PM Thank you, Silent!

Joanna Daniel October 27, 2020 at 6:16 AM Descriptive and apt for the title chosen, Kim:) Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2020 at 2:17 PM Thank you, Jo!

Victor Buhagiar October 27, 2020 at 12:19 AM Where is the six gun shooter? Lovely poem and format. ~~ Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2020 at 4:24 AM oh, you know she’s packing...lol!

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 26, 2020 at 9:59 PM A gorgeous poem, full of pleasing motion and color. An impressive contest entry. :) Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thank you, Evelyn!