Into Each Touch--Kib

Laying my arm on a headstone
I review times of grace,
when laughter crowned our stars
till midnight drew  your final breath--
Torn without love’s embrace
may rest lay down on us.



For the Keep It Brief Contest, nette onclaud
6 August 2019
Quote #3 -  "I think we miss that touch so much, that we crash
into each other, just so we can feel something."
Crash (2004)
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Inman Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:46 PM
A very different way of looking at the prompt, I like it.
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 4:13 PM
oh I like this one very much!!! Congrats on your win.
Messina Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your placement Juaneco. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Well done Juaneco. Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 4:23 PM
the pensive mood of your work defines your style, juaneco...many thanks for supporting my contest and fine congrats!
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