Intimidated

Wandering amongst the darkness, my life was in jeopardy
A pack of stealthy ferocious wolves, were stalking me like cattle
Slitting my throat in fear, blood dripped in pools for the rabid canines












*First attempt at Sijo!*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Very creative and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara
Gasun Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 1:40 AM
Awesome Sijo! Congratulations on your fantastic win my dear Dustin! love/hugs, Leonora
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January 26, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Dustin ...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Disturbingly good. Congrats
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Dustin! Annalise
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:01 PM
a very interesting sijo this is, Dustin! dark one. Congrats on your win!!
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