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Intervened

. Chained_ bound_ trapped Rescue needed wanted None to turn to_ at bottom of the darkest pit All alone, silence__wanting to scream_despair_sit Hear music, Angel's voice calling my name_ a gift So excited delighted__relief Happens_Jesus now chief Intervened

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Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/30/2010 9:48:00 AM

Cool poem, Sara. I like it!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/29/2010 4:01:00 PM

It was from a past relationship my dear, but thanks for your caring...love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2010 10:14:00 AM

I think it is a metaphor for how you feel with your back pain and stuff, right? As well as all the other things life throws at us. Yes, it will be a happy day when we are free of it all!! Luv Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/29/2010 9:52:00 AM

Glad you found the joy again, Sara..sometimes we're bombarded from all sides but Jesus the Christ watches and when He says "Enough" His light makes all things new!!! Love, Audrey

James Peranteau

Date: 10/29/2010 6:47:00 AM

You've done a fine rendition dear poet...you have clearly let Jesus' name ring ! much love, james

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 1:19:00 AM

thank you for sharing my friend duncan

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/28/2010 5:32:00 PM

this is a poem of hope and faith..loved it! Take care~Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2010 3:57:00 PM

Yes with Jesus in charge every day is brighter.. excellent lines Sara .. luv the way u showed the struggle and then the relief with your faith filled lines at the end... can hear those Angel's voices too. .. a true gift.. is this poem..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/28/2010 3:32:00 PM

nice write on God and faith... Sadly I battled good and bad and hope I have ended up where I should be...Thanks for going back and reading "My Dad" made me smile again to read it...He is missed and I miis his advice at times and always hope I make him proud..Thank you for your frienship and constant support...love Michael Ps. and will soup mail you back by tomorrow..

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 10/28/2010 3:32:00 PM

Hello Sara, So much depth here, wonderful I have read it over and over. Thank you As always, Shar

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/28/2010 1:52:00 PM

great work mom!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 1:36:00 PM

This is not an original idea..The way that I have put it together is original..I got the idea from a song..Sara