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                                  Chained_ bound_ trapped
                                  Rescue needed wanted
                  None to turn to_ at bottom of the darkest pit
              All alone, silence__wanting to scream_despair_sit
             Hear music, Angel's voice calling my name_ a gift
                              So excited delighted__relief
                                   Happens_Jesus now chief
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Hilliker Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Cool poem, Sara. I like it!
Falotico Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:01 PM
It was from a past relationship my dear, but thanks for your caring...love Michael
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 10:14 AM
I think it is a metaphor for how you feel with your back pain and stuff, right? As well as all the other things life throws at us. Yes, it will be a happy day when we are free of it all!! Luv Andrea
Haick Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Glad you found the joy again, Sara..sometimes we're bombarded from all sides but Jesus the Christ watches and when He says "Enough" His light makes all things new!!! Love, Audrey
Peranteau Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 6:47 AM
You've done a fine rendition dear poet...you have clearly let Jesus' name ring ! much love, james
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:19 AM
thank you for sharing my friend duncan
Wilson Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 5:32 PM
this is a poem of hope and faith..loved it! Take care~Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Yes with Jesus in charge every day is brighter.. excellent lines Sara .. luv the way u showed the struggle and then the relief with your faith filled lines at the end... can hear those Angel's voices too. .. a true gift.. is this poem..luv..
Ruebel Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Hello Sara, So much depth here, wonderful I have read it over and over. Thank you As always, Shar
Falotico Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM
nice write on God and faith... Sadly I battled good and bad and hope I have ended up where I should be...Thanks for going back and reading "My Dad" made me smile again to read it...He is missed and I miis his advice at times and always hope I make him proud..Thank you for your frienship and constant support...love Michael Ps. and will soup mail you back by tomorrow..
Culverhouse Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 1:52 PM
great work mom!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 1:36 PM
This is not an original idea..The way that I have put it together is original..I got the idea from a song..Sara
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