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International Women's Day

As a byway ahead grows quite dim late evening ‘s radiance slowly pales away --- This fiery yet compassionate woman brushes luster into her hair and retraces the gleam of Mother Mary's pledge so she could face her courage to raise consciousness from unknown whispers; praying that daybreak would find a clearer path back home to empowerment... a reminder that though one’s world is vast and diverse, she is connected to every female through ' gender balance': And through a need for equality, an inner light-wave cuddles her in the soft of a one-universe's halo, anointed by the gods, the earth, and of freedom itself. ------------- March Poems, Old Or New For Prizes Part 3 Of Easter Series For Carolyn Devonshire's Contest ------- 'Gender Balance' is one of the themes for International Women's Day
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Allison Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 3:56 AM
Beautiful verse Nette, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Nette, I like the way you approach "gender balance" and the need for equality. Well done! There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Inman Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Like a wonderful excerpt from a fantastical tale about a fairy world lost deep in a forest, a beautiful write.
Davey Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 7:23 PM
This poem should be published somewhere along side the other great poems of our time! Beautifully written, congrats on your 1st place finish, well deserved
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this unique gem Nette! : )
Carber Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Nette, if envy is the highest compliment, then I can say I envy your lyrical touch, the consistent beauty of your diction in this as in virtually all your poems. You were born to be a poet, girl!
Lindley Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Verses from a master poet's pen my friend! This one awes me and as if I were reading Emily Dickinson, Rosseti or Browning. A fav... thanks
Gupta Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:16 AM
Excellent verse, nette ... amazing ...
Sivey Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:52 AM
Vie will absolutely love this incredible write my friend! I am impressed by your creative aspect of this delightful poem here this morning! You have amazed me by you wondrous skill Nette, thank you for bringing me such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:34 AM
- An excellent and beautifully described poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Tim showed me this in the chat room, beautiful verse indeed nette!
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:54 PM
really like how you used the tiger as a metaphor, nicely done nette...good luck
Lawless Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 5:51 PM
masterfully done Nette, I took a similar bent on the picture.
Smith Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:41 PM
A lovely verse nette...best wishes
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Mystic of inner power well depicted in this poem, nette!
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Excellent! Well written Nette . Good luck in the contest :)
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