International Soul Aloft

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This beautifully designed Spring, star-studded night. Alive within these brave souls Of courage, truly, a breathless, Singular, moving delight! I am not here to be an advocate Only for me, a most piteous plea! Yelping, as a child,pay attention to me. But to also support oppressed others, so far across the sea! Kiiled with bloody, enthusiastic, Antediluvian treachery! Provincial~ oh, this I am not! May freedom be, bravely begot. Internationally, born thoughts, Keep my soul high in flight aloft! My soul tonight with immense celebration, in ecstasy, caught! 4/19/2024

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Elena Eagle

Date: 4/23/2024 9:05:00 AM

A creative poem for us all to enjoy today. Very thoughtful and reflective.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/19/2024 11:02:00 AM

'Antediluvian treachery' - phrase of the week I think, as it nails the bloodthirsty acts of the murderers. Great write, Pangie. :) Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/19/2024 11:54:00 AM

Greetings, Gershon! Thank you! Those two words keep running about in my cranium. Beats the criminal modern, casual usage! Antediluvian Treacherty ..tells it like it is! Gut Shabbos to you and yours.! Bas Noach, Pangie cc Pangie xx

Regina Elliott

Date: 4/19/2024 10:40:00 AM

Yes, indeed, a defense of the just. Marvelous and eloquent poem, dear Pangie. Grandissimo! Of God's abundant blessings to you, Dearest poetess. xoxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/19/2024 10:52:00 AM

I never think of my poetry as great, but I know what it used to be like, and I see it seemingly taking on a life of its own.)) Yes, the meek and good are slaughtered. And their murderers got some just desserts. But we can’t bring back those slaughtered on stove tops or at the concert for peace …killed by deranged savages. Thank you, R.E.! Pangie xx