Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

Intermingled Poems of Love

A tender smile, a fleeting glance,
Eyes that meet to touch the soul,
A beating heart, a breathless breath,
A deepened sense of something whole.

(A tender smile, a fleeting glance),
A need to please and give of self,
(Missed beats of hearts and minds in trance)
To share all things of mind and heart.

(One feels a sense of something whole),
With openness and sweet surrender
(Rest warm and soothing in the soul)…
And of the whole become a part.

(Outshining aura’s brilliant glow),
A touch of closeness and of warmth,
(Upsurge of passions soon bestow)
The radiance of inner glow.

(Strong flowing currents charged with fire)
Bathe in light of endless aura,
(Now fanned and fed by love’s desire)…
A current charged with endless flow.

(Emboldened hearts combine to share)
To feel another's joy and pain,
(Surrender fears…lay each soul bare)
Two beating hearts, as one, to care.
(Soon bond as one, their love declared)…
And of the thoughts that words can't speak,
Two open souls, in silence, share.

To speak of love through word and song
Is at its best, mere child’s play,
In contrast to the silent prose
That heart and soul, through love, convey.


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved


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~8th Place~
Contest: Intermingle
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 04/16/2015

Poems used:
#1 Poem, Posted: 12/01/2014 -- What Is Love
#2 Poem, Posted: 10/05/2014 -- Amorousness (in parenthesis and italics)
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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:43 PM Nice win...PD

Eve Roper April 17, 2015 at 1:20 PM Congratulations on your always wonderful read a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve Sandra Haight April 18, 2015 at 3:24 PM Thank you so much, Eve. I am pleased that you liked it, and appreciate your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra

David Mohn April 16, 2015 at 8:02 PM This works so well Sandra...simply beautiful...congrats to you! Sandra Haight April 18, 2015 at 3:25 PM Hi David, I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Thank you so much for stopping by. Sandra

Jan Allison April 16, 2015 at 4:54 PM These flowed together so beautifully - many congrats on your win in this challenging contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight April 16, 2015 at 5:07 PM Thank you so much, Jan. It is always to nice to count on your with your lovely comments and congratulations. I appreciate it so much, friend! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2015 at 11:23 PM wow, you found two really good poems to intermingle there. I have a few that make for a really short poem even when intermingled. I don't stand a chance against one like this!! Sandra Haight March 1, 2015 at 9:39 AM Thanks, Andrea. Hopefully, you'll put a nice one together with the help of your excellent creative muse! :) Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2015 at 12:44 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go!! This wasn't so easy for me. You make it seemless.Thanks for stopping by.Sara Sandra Haight February 27, 2015 at 5:17 PM Thank you so much, Sara. Yes, it was difficult to work with! Thank you so much for your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Kelly Deschler February 26, 2015 at 10:09 PM I like your use of two contrasting love poems. One of bold passion and one of tenderness. Both fit perfectly together... You did a beautiful job with this challenging contest, Sandra. Good luck to you! Sandra Haight February 27, 2015 at 11:42 AM Hi Kelly, so nice of you to read my poem and to offer such encouraging comments and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

M. L. Kiser February 25, 2015 at 6:17 PM An excellent pen...good luck in the contest. Sandra Haight February 27, 2015 at 11:48 AM Thank you, M.L. I appreciate your positive comment and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud February 25, 2015 at 12:51 PM effervescent in content and flow.. it seemed just like one work, Sandra.. you are awesome!.. huggs Sandra Haight February 27, 2015 at 11:48 AM Hi Nette, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I value your opinion so much. Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper February 24, 2015 at 1:57 PM Beautiful poem, 7 good luck in the contest Blessings Sandra Haight February 24, 2015 at 8:58 PM Hi Eve, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and support! Hugs, Sandra

John Fleming February 24, 2015 at 1:20 PM P.s I forgot the "Seven"! So here it is..."7"!!!!

John Fleming February 24, 2015 at 1:10 PM Absolute poetic genius!!! I would say the best poem that i have ever read on Poetry soup!!! If this poem does not get the accolades that is so richly deserves, then i, for one, will roll my eyes in utter despair!!! Superbly done...end of!!!! :) john. Sandra Haight February 24, 2015 at 9:00 PM Oh John, you are too kind! I so much appreciate your compliments and encouraging words. Writing poetry has always been something I love to do, and I began as a child many years ago. Again, thank you so much, I really appreciate your support and the 7 too! Sandra John Fleming February 24, 2015 at 1:13 PM By the way: In my humble opinion you possess great natural poetic ability!!! :) john.

Emile Pinet February 24, 2015 at 1:08 PM You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it gently came alive for me. Your talent come through strong and straight from the heart. Emile. #7 Sandra Haight February 24, 2015 at 9:03 PM Hi Emile, I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I so much appreciate your positive comments and support and the rating. Thank you so much! Sandra