Interlude

Blue-gray foggy mist hanging over the lake like an ethereal blanket obscuring 
the surface of the water and making the scene look like an artist's water color
or perhaps pastels, the chalk blended lightly with a finger tip, the far shore 
barely visible from where I sit, ancient trees rising like giants, silent sentinels, 
defiant, too early for the usual chatter of the birds, they still sleep, 
undisturbed, only one awake is me and the occasional turtle coming up to 
breathe, gently disturbing the placid lake surface as evidenced by a single ring, 
its purpose to slowly expand and dissipate noiselessly, as the orange sun has 
begun to peek over the horizon and that magical time is gone, those few 
moments between the darkness of night and the harsh light of dawn, that gray 
soft interlude before reality intrudes, when it seems the whole world 
sleeps...and the stillness and the silence is overwhelming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Ahh....breathtaking...., feels like a narration of the opening of a wonderful love story........the images drift like clouds. Glad I didn't miss this one! :)
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April 25, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Congrats Danielle on your featured poem this week on the Soup... wonderful words to feature and share with us all..luv.. Linda-Marie
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April 24, 2010 at 5:57 AM
Congrats Danielle on this outstanding write being featured this week enjoyed the read keep up the great writing
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April 19, 2010 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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March 1, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Dear Danielle, my warm congatulations on your win in This is fantastic! Worthy of praise. Peace, love, Audrey
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March 1, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Danielle~. Love, Carol
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February 28, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Congrats Danielle on your winning poem in the Act 1 Scene 1 contest.. an excellent write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy my friend ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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