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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

INTENTION transcendent dynamic turbulent consolation overlooking tonal varitions& possibilities a disjunctive predictions in a discrete prescence to diminish & completely eliminate the infinite though charming & original stay unappreciated surreal feelings exposed in wing words of replicated writing reinvented & configured then liberated

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/2/2023 1:29:00 AM

I think I'll morph and steal this line as the title of my first book "though charming & original stayed unappreciated" haha - good write Brian :)