Intended Freedoms

Intended Freedoms

Thomas Jefferson
Prepared The Constitution.
Freedom: black and white.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 2, 2010

Poetic form:  Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 6, 2010 at 12:09 PM
So much said in just three lines. The last line makes your point and fits well with the title. Thank you for the invitation to try your "End Line Word" form. I posted my attempt called "Harmony" today. I hope you enjoy it. Have a good weekend. Karen
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