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Intangible Obscurity

Unwritten chapters of poetry hidden mid brick-wall blank pages 'tween lines of history's past grievances and faux pas, relentless whispers of tenuous echoes chanting unintelligibly whilst abstruse inky passages fade further intangible obscurity

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Daniel Turner

Date: 10/17/2016 9:18:00 AM

All kinds of walls, some are not meant to be scaled and are surrounded by a mote. Another beauty, Paloma:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 11:55:00 AM

Some are meant to be taken down....thanks Daniel. :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/17/2016 7:26:00 AM

This one has me singing Mellencamp in my head, "And the walls, come tumbling down" We do build walls at times I believe to keep the past in the past but still, there are cracks and it sneaks in when we least expect it. Amazing piece Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 11:55:00 AM

Oh wow, I haven't listened to him in ages, thanks, me and John in the same breath....