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Instrumental Speech

Strumming the guitar, His soul speaks through every riff: Dialogue of strings.

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/7/2010 10:39:00 PM

Very well written Senryu. One can just about hear the speech of the guitar strings. Thanks for sharing. Happy new year! Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2010 8:58:00 PM

Just love a well-crafted haiku or senryu. Bravo! andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/7/2010 5:45:00 PM

Perhaps you also play, Raul? I hear your love of music in your poetry....and assume you write about B.B.King here....with wistful thoughts of your own tune? Just wondering....

Sue Mason

Date: 1/7/2010 5:14:00 PM

Must be about B.B. and Lucille ... or maybe ....? Wonderfully done here, Raul !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2010 3:26:00 PM

Who is this person on the guitar? Is it BBKing? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/7/2010 3:07:00 PM

Beautifully penned Raul,Yes instrumental Speech can relfect the Soul as much as poetry,lovely Senryu..I love playing the guitar,I love the piano too,When i was younger i wished to learn the piano,but Mum could only buy me the guitar:)Now i have the piano but all i know to play is Happy Birthday:)..Maybe its time for a New Hobby for me...Lovely Senryu..Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/7/2010 2:51:00 PM

nicely penned