instinct

cascading falls rush to the beats
clear freshwater urges salmon leaps
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Hello Triveni, Yes the salmon do leaps in fresh water. Enjoy your day my dear friend. /Darlene/
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February 28, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Hello Triveni, You are welcome my dear friend. yes there is so much to learn and read from Mother Nature. Your welcome . Cheers. Hugs. /Darlene/
mysore Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. There is so much to read, to observe and to learn from mother Nature don't you think so? Thank you for the blessing dear poet, I am grateful to you for your precious time. Cheers!
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
mysore Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 7:37 PM
ahoy, thank you dear for your kind visit. thank you for the sweet words dear friend. means so much to me. blessings & cheers.
Crandall Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Cool poem! I've never seen that for real, but I've seen footage of it. Very impressive. Mother Nature has the best imagination!
mysore Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 11:26 PM
you should see them live dear poet. thank you for your kind visit. I am glad you like it, thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Concise description of a scene in nature, Thriveni. Janice
mysore Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 12:54 AM
thank you for your kind visit dear poet. yeah, it is strange behavior of salmon to swim upstream. thank you for your time dear friend. cheers.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Really nice! Thanks for reading my sonny and cher. To really know them you should type in Sonny and Cher on YouTube to hear them sing. She was really tall and he was a short little guy!
mysore Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. your words means much to me. I shall check it out, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Nice imagery, Thriveni!
mysore Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 12:49 AM
thank you dear poet for your kind visit. yeah we too sometimes take risks against odds don't we? salmon giddy heads. I am glad you liked it dear friend. thank you. cheers!
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