In-Stilled - Triplet

To ease the damage from love’s withdraw
Here’s a remedy I learned from Pa:
Use alcohol as your wrecking ball


10/9/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 14, 2011 at 5:08 AM
A cheeky little bit of advice Susan, I'll keep it in mind....cheers Margaret
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October 11, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Is that anything like Distilled? Haha. Some can sure cause wrecks with their drinking. Another clever little poem! Glad you liked my guitar poem. NIce seeing you here too, Susan. Finally I am trying to catch up on my comments!!
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October 10, 2011 at 10:32 AM
A pithy little poem...a gem! xoxo Robert.
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October 10, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Sad that your father or anyone's father set an example like that but it happens everyday..Very creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winners' circle to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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October 9, 2011 at 10:39 PM
LOL.....
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October 9, 2011 at 1:47 PM
ouchy. works real good for the purpose, tho, have noticed. thanks for the write, Susan, beauty day to ya. Namaste~N
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