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Instant Attraction

Instant Attraction
Stood there on a railway station Their eyes met, it was the first step Doesn't take much imagination To perceive what's following next. It was an instant attraction He proposed lunch, too soon, too much? "Yes please” was her chain reaction And the day struck the Midas touch. They'd agreed to meet up next week To share a lovely afternoon Of which she could not ever speak A love tryst in a hotel room. Such passion she had never known Her heart came unfurled like a rose Too soon the lovin’ hours had flown Time to bring things to wistful close. Being together was so good Parting would drive then both crazy Part they must, it was understood Because she's a married lady. Should she stay or follow her heart It’s a secret she'd have to hide Would it be too painful to part Mixed up were her feelings inside. She watched as her dear husband slept He'd been such a good steadfast man Would he hurt badly if she left Could she dare to go with the plan. Dejection was par for the course They'd wallowed in perfect romance A goodbye to whom she adored Hurt more than a slash from a lance. “Stars aligned the moment they met Was a moment they’d not regret.” *+*+* A poem inspired by the film: A Brief Encounter
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Leffanta Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Pheromones are Mother Nature's way of getting who she wants! Aloha! Rico
Edmonds  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:10 PM
You could be right about that Rico, if two people make one another feel easy, then it’s easy to fall in love. Thanks, Belle
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November 3, 2020 at 2:58 AM
Very romantic, especially when stars align...
Edmonds  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Silent One... Belle
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