Instant Attraction

Each and every day...when you walk by 
You always seem...to catch my eye 
Two months now, we've worked side-by-side  
No longer, my love for you...I can not hide 
It's the things you do...and the way you act 
When I say good morning...how you react 
Your tender smiles, and sweet hello's 
The way you dress...your stylish clothes 
Your smell, your scent...of sweet perfume 
Like a dozen roses...fill the room 
From the very first time...when we both met 
I said to myself, I'm her easy...get 
There was something about you...from the very start 
There was something about you...that touched my heart 
You were so kind, so nice...so true 
You turned my gray day...bright and blue 
So now it's time...for me to say 
I've had a crush on you...ever since that day 
I ask your hand, be held in mine...
And share my world...our hearts entwine 
Forever, my love, will I...love you 
And perhaps one day, we'll both say...I do 


I'm crushing on you Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver 
4-5-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/18/2019 6:16:00 PM
G'day Charles … nicely written Charles. I'd say you were smitten wouldn't you - well done - Lindsay
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Date: 4/7/2019 12:51:00 PM
A great poem Charles - the rhyme and rhythm in this outstanding love poem adds to its attractiveness - a sure fave. Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/5/2019 9:10:00 PM
Gee, you are one romantic dude! I love it! Panagiota
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Date: 4/5/2019 10:42:00 AM
Very romantic Charlie, two hearts coming together I think that's a situation many of us have been in. Good luck. Tom.
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