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Inspired by Kobayashi Issa

seed begs a flower
to grow to blossom to die
seed coat zips open

magpie dawn chorus
caroles to folks a warning
chac-check-kak get back

leafy seadragon
adorned with saddles of kelp
fish not horse of course
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations on your winning work being on the winners' list. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. 👏✍️ Sara K.
Anderson Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 6:13 PM
Thanks very much! I appreciate the placing! Such a great honor.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:44 PM
Cool set of ku. Congrats
Anderson Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 11:29 PM
Thanks very much! From the expert!!! I love your work. All the best!
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