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Inspiration's Debut

Inspirations come When the pretty pixies hum While humans succumb

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Gael Attal

Date: 2/9/2009 4:09:00 PM

Thanks Sue, Changed it

Sue Mason

Date: 2/9/2009 3:01:00 PM

Awesome! I love this ... I think its more of a Senyru though which is the same syllable count as a Haiku but more about human behavior, whereas a Haiku is about nature. Don't know if you were familar with the Senyru Form ... I've learned so much here at the Soup and they're are entirely too many different forms ... LOL ... your words here are great, Gael ... senyru or haiku they paint a picture and a message!! Welcome to the Soup!

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/8/2009 4:36:00 PM

great haiku...I like it...Maryam