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Inspiration's Debut

Inspirations come
When the pretty pixies hum
While humans succumb

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Gael Attal

February 9, 2009 at 4:09 PM

Thanks Sue, Changed it

Sue Mason

February 9, 2009 at 3:01 PM

Awesome! I love this ... I think its more of a Senyru though which is the same syllable count as a Haiku but more about human behavior, whereas a Haiku is about nature. Don't know if you were familar with the Senyru Form ... I've learned so much here at the Soup and they're are entirely too many different forms ... LOL ... your words here are great, Gael ... senyru or haiku they paint a picture and a message!! Welcome to the Soup!