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For Natasha L Scragg's contest Inspirational Phrases And What They Mean To Us. Date posted July 4, 2026

Inspirational Quotes


“You can never cross the ocean until you
have the courage to lose sight of the shore” –
Christopher Columbus

“For the success of climbing the mountain peak
you need to forget the haven of the ground unique.”
- My quote.

The notion of nebulous ambition drifts quietly away free, 
floats on the formless wings of the psychic clouds wispy. 
The luring mind's horizon disappears in the hollow sky fawn, 
the sense of loss morphs into failure to reach the destination dawn. 

If you aspire to sail bravely across the high sea, 
where the winds carry the scent of the new land free, 
you watch in the distance the familiar shoreline fade, 
you’re tense to leave the home terrain that safety has made. 
“You can never cross the ocean until you
have the courage to lose sight of the shore” as the last view.

On your uphill climb of the formidable mountain face,
the summit of success lies beyond slithery track of failure trace, 
you can’t reach at the end of the effort if you’re scared stiff,
if you don’t rely on detachment with the of strength of self-belief.

The highest summits of success always demand 
a heavy toll from the forlorn mind and from the toiling hand. 
Pursuing the formidable goal alone, you give a high price
for the success that surely depends on your sacrifice.

It’s a timeless truth that all great achievements hold
the treasure of what is given up to reach within their fold.
“For the success of climbing the mountain peak
you need to forget the haven of the ground unique.”
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Scragg Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:18 PM
Subimal, thank you for your entry in the contest. Your poem speaks strong truth and it hits the point well in your penultimate verse. Hard work and sacrifice are needed to reach success. I like the way you bring tiredness into this verse too..."forlorn mind and toiling hand"... the idea of ploughing through the tougher times even when we mat not feel like it.... and your own quote at the end suggests having to go above and beyond and out of the comfort zone "forget the haven of the ground"... you bring out the reality of success but in an encouraging way. Thank you for submitting it in the contest 😊😉
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 1:53 AM
Thank you, Natasha, for the placement and for your excuisite comments. It was a challenging contest I loved to write for.
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