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Inspiration From the Start

The Big Bang explodes- then pure beauty floods our lives, inspiration forms. For Raul’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 4/16/2010 1:52:00 PM
I like the action in the opening line. It's interesting where the inspiration springs from at times. Enjoyed the interesting view in your poem. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:25:00 AM
I really do admire this one. (s.mail)
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Date: 4/15/2010 11:29:00 AM
Great Haiku with descriptive power.. Good luck in the contest....Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:15:00 PM
Hey Gareth, Thnx for the honor of having my poem place Ist in your sponsored contest! And thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments on my poem...means a whole lot to me! Later, Jimmy
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:31:00 AM
Great interpretation of the painting here, dear Gareth. I wrote a longer comment before but I had to log in again before I sent it so I lost it :( Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:49:00 AM
This is a One great explosion..awesome..Charma
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:12:00 PM
Fine haiku with fine imagery boosting the meaning. Good luck
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:03:00 PM
Highly original, Gareth! I like your interpretation of Raul's photo. Good luck in his contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:04:00 PM
Good luck with this terrific Haiku Gareth... great choice of words used ... can u please tell me how u get the photo in your contest area to post... I must have missed this feature somehow.. thankxxx luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/10/2010 3:37:00 PM
James~ What A UNIQUE POEM for the contest! Best wishes! Laura :)
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:29:00 PM
Thanks G.J. I looked at the haiku. It is to much for me . I may try it just to give a laugh. I do like this one . You make it seem easy p.d. was here
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:08:00 PM
beautiful entry! Gareth!
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