Cory Long Poet Lanterne

Inspiration

By cory long
Inspired contest 

Waves 
come in
capturing
your attention.
Releasing your thoughts.

See 
visions
feeling the 
sensations run 
through your bodies core.

Close
 your eyes 
hear the sound
of peacefulness.

Drift
Away  for 
A minute
Open your eyes
ready to write again.

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Doris Culverhouse July 1, 2011 at 10:55 AM Great second place....enjoyed!!

Dinda Minardi June 28, 2011 at 7:08 AM Congratulation, Dear Cory! Great piece you got here :)

Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2011 at 2:55 AM Big congratulations, Cory! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2011 at 7:39 PM wow, cory, what a great poem and amazing win. Congrats to you, my friend.

Robert A. Dufresne June 27, 2011 at 3:52 PM excellent work Cory. Congratulations to you!

Debbie Guzzi June 27, 2011 at 2:04 PM such a clear joining with YOu how great Light & Love

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2011 at 12:28 PM The expressions make one want to go to your inspiration point..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 12:14 PM Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Cory. Love, Carol

Treasa Jarvis June 27, 2011 at 10:44 AM Congrats on your win. Great job. God Bless.

Caryl Muzzey June 27, 2011 at 10:39 AM Congratulations Cory on your second place win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Black Eyed Susan June 27, 2011 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your win! A wonderful lanterne. I can already feel the peacefulness :)

Shannon Deane June 27, 2011 at 6:27 AM Congrats cory for your win in the contest...luv

Dr.Ram Mehta June 27, 2011 at 5:59 AM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 26, 2011 at 8:14 PM Congrats cory on your second place in this great cool contest with your awesome entry luv.. a super top notch win..luv..

Lisa Cooper June 23, 2011 at 9:43 AM this is beautiful, best of luck in the contest

Shannon Deane June 23, 2011 at 9:18 AM Fantastic write Cory, best of luck in the Inspired contest... luv Shannon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 22, 2011 at 9:07 PM have done this many times cory to clear my head at the beach .. especially to write.. luv the expressive manner u presented this ..quite impressive my friend..

Paul Beadnall June 22, 2011 at 5:14 PM BRILLIANT

Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2011 at 5:07 PM Cory, I started to write on the same theme because the ocean is a great source of inspiration. Enjoyed your write very much. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn