Inspiration

A thought a mindless educated guess, u thought it cud hold a little 
longer long enough for press.
But however you're mind gave in and was already fried, that was the 
day that u wish I'd died. All on the line
you gave it yur best shot if not the suckyiestu gave it all uve got.
But ur sinking inside yurself Woundering if this is all a dream this 
mindbodelinv shell that's tearing at the seam. You look up at the 
stars and began to say why today why today. Then you're inner self 
gives you strength to stand along side, no more books or cheats to 
hide.
I'm agreeing to you becuse you ate worth fine gold, for those wise 
unforgetable words that u once told. U told me to never giveup even 
if it means falling Through time, never give up efforts not a crime! 
So from step to step each heartblowing guttwisteing path we all try 
to forget, I'll never get lost they're not dishing yet. Yur hero yur 
thunder yur racingstretching claw may always be stowed in the back 
of yur mind, for booth two way streets we claim to see intwined. Set 
you're watch and watch time tick away, but the clock isn't the onely 
one it's the day after day. Endless bliss of light sheds every 
contusion u may claim, butbu used yur bestfreind yur inspiration yur 
consience for usless fame. Who's to blame who is to blame forever 
and ever he remembers yur name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/8/2010 2:26:00 PM
Great write!!! Well said... Glad you like my poems!!! Thank you always Michael
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