Era Thompson Poet Rhyme

Inspiration

When the universe around me

Rush into my soul,

When the swelling of my grows beyond control

Then erupts the lava of intense desire

to capture beauty and express

What God inspires.


By Era Thompson
Copyright 05.02.10

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 6, 2010 at 6:22 PM Perfect. Keep on writing, Era. Post more of your poems for the world to see. :) Best wishes, your friend always, Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 4, 2010 at 12:17 AM Beautiful, Era! I do think there is a word missing though in the third line, no? Love this one. Keep posting more of your writes. Your friend, Caroline.