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Inspiration

When the universe around me Rush into my soul, When the swelling of my grows beyond control Then erupts the lava of intense desire to capture beauty and express What God inspires. By Era Thompson Copyright 05.02.10

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/6/2010 6:22:00 PM

Perfect. Keep on writing, Era. Post more of your poems for the world to see. :) Best wishes, your friend always, Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/4/2010 12:17:00 AM

Beautiful, Era! I do think there is a word missing though in the third line, no? Love this one. Keep posting more of your writes. Your friend, Caroline.