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Insomnia

midnight minutes tick away. lay awake, sleepless dismay. a pillow, refuge for an empty head. time, a book that cannot be read. simple sheets, enclose around. I hear a very distant sound.. WAKE UP!!! there, alone a restless mind. sleep, a haven I cannot find. close your eyes, play a game. I think my head has gone insane. snakes and spiders, completely surround. I invision leaving this town. try again, close your eyes. these beings won't let you leave alive. GET UP, RUN! you love the chase! QUICK! head for that warm embrace! there's nothing you can do, they're gaining fast! how long is this dream gonna last?? wake up dead, what a finish. hope for sleep has been diminished.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
When I welcomed you to PoetrySoup I hoped that you would continue your writing and share it with us. Today I am asking you to please continue your poetry writing. Just write what is in your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. I will stop back soon and hope to be able to read some new poetry from you at that time Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:12:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry .. I am an insomniac so relate ...share words with luv..
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Date: 7/1/2011 8:46:00 AM
Wow! A very interesting poem, dear Jason. A big welcome to poetrySoup, keep writing, and God bless, Ingibo
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jason. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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