Insomnia

dare I close my eyes
where dancing fiends haunt my dreams~
red rimmed eyes falter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 5:43 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Patricia. Have had this problem in the past snd don't want it back. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 9:24 PM
I like the imagery and message of this one, Patricia. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Very cute and lovely haiku with apt images, Patricia
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