Insignificant,Superiority

Insignificant,superiority


I' don't want you to not say
please don't not walk away
I unsurely don't know
I don't not love you
and it isn't unclear
we haven't found yesterday
why can't we lose our tomorrows
why didn't you not stay


By: Jeremy Siedlecki

this is what I am going to call a Hydromoron

P.S. did you notice that the subtitles in my "The Darkest Rain" 
were their own poem portraying the life of man while
the haiku's portrayed life itself?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/18/2011 5:20:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Jeremy. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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