Insight Into Insight

Can you hear it..?
The war in my mind
The thoughts crashing down on me
The smash and the grind

Do you see it..?
My expression misplaced
Anxiety blowing up on me
Numbness of face

Is it normal..?
The panic untamed
The overactive fantasy 
That burns in my brain

Can we go now..?
Away from the flame
Avoid the rolling gunfire
That keeps me awake

Do you wonder. .?
Where it all went wrong
Never ending daydream
of never ending song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 15, 2013 at 5:20 AM
wow! very powerful and well-written...
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