Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Inside the Wall

We build up walls just to hide…
Where no one can touch our fears or pride…
As life drifts by they slowly fall…
Age has given us the wisdom beyond the wall…
Where eyes see over and past contemplation…
As reality paints its own interpretation…
While patience falls from its virtue…
I sit and write from my soul to you…

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Dinda Minardi September 18, 2013 at 1:58 AM it is just a wow, Michael! I think u should consider as a motivator, too! very uplifting :)

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2013 at 9:48 PM Hello Michael, Stopping in to say hello.. I hope you are doing well.... :-)...Linda

Shah Jehan Ashrafi August 18, 2013 at 8:04 PM very nice poem..i liked the rhyming...

Sruthi Ajith August 7, 2013 at 1:43 AM it's true that no one can touch our fears or pride when we build up a wall. wonderful poem

Cherie Thomas July 30, 2013 at 8:17 PM Wow!!! Truly beautiful, inspiring words...ty:) cherie

Donna Jones July 30, 2013 at 6:46 PM Ahhhh I love the age has given us the freedom..I've certainly found this to be true the last few years...life is better after 50! Great poem

Karen Anglesey July 30, 2013 at 3:39 PM You remind that when we write we give a a piece of your soul as a gift. Very nicely worded :)

Royal Ninja July 30, 2013 at 2:19 PM we all have our own reality to face and it as you said paints itself, glad to have read this Michael

Nette Onclaud July 30, 2013 at 11:22 AM been a while, michael... i am taken by the poignant mood of your work and thought-provoking lines... lovely!>>:) huggs

April Gabriella July 28, 2013 at 4:57 PM Oh this is a very nice piece. Great words you have penned! :)

Audrey Haick July 28, 2013 at 4:21 PM Good to be reading this lovely poem you've written, Michael. Such truth in what you're saying! I hope all is well, my friend. Always, Annalise

Poet Tacito July 28, 2013 at 2:40 PM How awesome it is to read your work again! I love the emotional honesty in these lines. How the walls can break us. Excellent!

Russell Sivey July 28, 2013 at 2:40 PM This poem is free flowing and wonderfully significant! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening write this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

Wilma Neels July 28, 2013 at 10:57 AM Another beautiful piece MJF. Hope your day and weekend is a great one ;) CTH