Inside the Outer Side

Making and doing (poetry) pursuing, with the re-membering of feel 

and shape concerned, yet not by all..!  all are not intaking of

the coming awareness, with life in rude health and how it forms!

a quest of proportion & perception now unnoticed and unsung

and LOVE..? is it LOVE.? with the (unlovley) or the plain function 

or..? even the unfunctioning of humanity not to sing or portray
 
its truth where..?  is there not beauty? if not in all.!  all of life as it is

manifest, & with no malady to intrusive! for the negating of mankinds

intrinsic judgmental leaning, both inner and outer to an eventuall despair, 

(is ever the  better love of all & in all affairs.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mac Donald Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Bold by true statements here, Joe! Poetry, the unravelling of the senses, other times an emotional journey. Here your sage and muse are at loggerheads? Elizabeth pinned it down though, it all seems to come together with the last line. Oh, best wishes to you and yours! Love, Mikki
Wesley Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 8:32 AM
A wonderful title Joe for a poem deep in thought. I love the message especially he last line!
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:55 AM
HI, JOe, here is one that I had somehow never read before. It is an interesting one. SEems paradoxical (is that a word?) HOpe the beginning of your week was great. LUv, Andrea
Foulk Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:50 PM
a great piece of work Joe, enjoyed it.
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 12:07 PM
We do have an "intrinsic judgmental leaning," Joe, but there is beauty in life that overrides all of the negativity. I really like the message in this poem! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Well written, enjoyed taking this journey with you!
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 3:46 AM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one.Your presence at my work made my morning brighter..Thanks for stopping..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Nice presentation Joe with this poem ..question marks make it interesting to read over and over again.. the lines of intense expression.. speaks volumes .. enjoyed with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Nice introspective thoughts yiou have penned, Joe
Falotico Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Nice thoughts expressed in this fine poetry from your heart...well done Joe..
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