Inside the Mad Throes

Shackled by the fetters of deep desperation,
   Can't break it free, can't break it free,
My mind voice rises to the top of consternation,
   Can't let it be, can't let it be,

Tackled by my disturbed mind's waking,
   I shout and scream, I shout and scream,
Rewind the poise, my mind's now shaking,
   I doubt and dream, I doubt and dream,

Delirious, I utter words of confusion,
   Listen to me, listen to me,
Who will put an end to this delusion?
   Just hear my plea, just hear my plea,

Serious, I mutter in the mad throes of my mind,
   What to do now? What to do now?
Clueless, I drill through my mind entwined,
   Heal me somehow, heal me somehow.




11/25/18

The I of the storm contest 
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, Jo - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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December 10, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Jo. I love the flow of your piece.
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December 10, 2018 at 1:39 PM
I love everything about this piece, it's impact, energy, insight. Jo, you wholly embraced the spirit of my contest, congratulations on your first place finish. xomo
Green Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Very dark and deep but so well written my friend. You have captured the inner torture of a mind that has fallen from its stand, fracturing it's ability to think rationally. Really cool and I like the style of this. Best of luck in the contest.
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Jo, contest or not, this is a great poem.
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November 25, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Very deep and fitting for the contest..
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