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Inside the Bus

Bus at the corner Passengers are getting in - They all want front seat

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Date: 9/18/2008 5:26:00 PM

So true. What a fresh approach to send a message deeper than the actual words. Thank you for allowing me to chuckle with this one and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Deneen White

Date: 9/10/2008 4:23:00 PM

I would rather sit in the middle, nice write take care D-nyce

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2008 8:45:00 PM

It appears that the bus is not like Church. Everyone is looking for the back pews instead the ones in the front. I always sit in the front, especially in class. Great job! ~Joseph

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/6/2008 8:09:00 AM

How true! Isn't human nature interesting and funny?!...~ Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/6/2008 6:04:00 AM

thats where i want to sit. JHL