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Inside of Me

My heart; an ink jar
    My soul; the feather that writes
My eyes; the windows

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Joanne Carty

June 8, 2009 at 11:37 AM

Lovely piece, so true. Thanks for your review of my work!

Charmaine Chircop

June 6, 2009 at 4:51 PM

this is a beautiful--the eyes are truely the windows of our heart and soul,the heart -ink jar--the soul--the feather that writes,our soul reflection of our heart--im proud of you little brother and so of sweet alley too--charma

June 6, 2009 at 11:54 AM

I really like the opening line--so fitting for the heart of a writer. So much depth in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen