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Inside of Me

My heart; an ink jar My soul; the feather that writes My eyes; the windows

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Joanne Carty

Date: 6/8/2009 11:37:00 AM

Lovely piece, so true. Thanks for your review of my work!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/6/2009 4:51:00 PM

this is a beautiful--the eyes are truely the windows of our heart and soul,the heart -ink jar--the soul--the feather that writes,our soul reflection of our heart--im proud of you little brother and so of sweet alley too--charma

Date: 6/6/2009 11:54:00 AM

I really like the opening line--so fitting for the heart of a writer. So much depth in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Alley Poe

Date: 6/5/2009 9:14:00 PM

Brillant imagery my poet -Always your Alley

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2009 6:18:00 PM

Amazing senryu, straight from your precious, poetic heart, Jeremiah! Excellent! Love, Carolyn