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Inside of Her

Feeling that over takes my heart and soul I enter in her fire Her eyes show desire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 10:58:00 PM
Great poem. Love-making is best when it's on fire.xp i love how you rhyme fire with desire!! ~Always Lynette
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Date: 6/8/2009 4:27:00 PM
The second line is pure fire...love this write.
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Date: 6/8/2009 3:59:00 PM
The very essence of your art touches my very soul in which brings me endless joy. -Always your Alley
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Date: 6/8/2009 3:52:00 PM
great imagery little brother you make me proud
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:28:00 PM
beautiful description of love making--so creative little bro--charma
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