Inside of Her

Feeling that over takes my heart and soul
I enter in her fire
Her eyes show desire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chachere Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 10:58 PM
Great poem. Love-making is best when it's on fire.xp i love how you rhyme fire with desire!! ~Always Lynette
Higgins Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 4:27 PM
The second line is pure fire...love this write.
Poe Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 3:59 PM
The very essence of your art touches my very soul in which brings me endless joy. -Always your Alley
Megens Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 3:52 PM
great imagery little brother you make me proud
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 2:28 PM
beautiful description of love making--so creative little bro--charma
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