Inside myself

I.
I got lost inside myself one night,
Like stars fall through a dome.
The body stayed, but not the light
The soul had left for home.

II.
I walked a library of breath,
Books unwritten, spines of bone.
Each dream was shelved behind my eyes,
And each one dreamed alone.

III.
My ribs turned into corridors,
Each one a silver thread,
Where time knelt down and locked its doors
Inside my hollow head.

IV.
I passed a moon with open veins,
Its blood was blue and slow.
The silence whispered names of me
I never got to know.

V.
I vanished into what I was
Not flesh, not mind, but mist.
And something vast began to buzz
In all I don’t exist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Hello Florin, Wowo! What an ending to this poem. i enjoyed. Hugs. /Darlene/
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October 27, 2025 at 3:31 PM
Hello Florin, You are very welcome. A hug for you Florin my friend. /Darlene/
Lacatus Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful message my dear Darlene. It makes me very happy to see your encouragements! Lots of hugs! :)
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