Rachel Couvillon Poet Rhyme

Inside I'M Dying

Inside
         These walls we dance
         To the rhythm
         Of sweet romance
          
I'm 
         Held tight in your embrace
         Staring into your eyes, darling
         Can't you feel my heart race

Dying 
         To let inhibitions fall
         And say what I feel
         "One day, we'll have it all"

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 27, 2012 at 3:21 PM Well written dear poet. This is a gem.

Pace Ink-U-Script April 27, 2012 at 2:53 PM I love this piece Rachel!! hugs INK-U-SCRIPT

John Rhinem April 27, 2012 at 2:43 PM Smile ~ You know the thing about beautiful roses, dear beautiful Rachel ~ Their fragrance becomes so much sweeter, once they die * Smile, You are sooo beautiful ~ My love, Always, John!:) ~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2012 at 2:33 PM This poem impress me, well written Rachel. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

April 27, 2012 at 2:30 PM I can feel the love in this beautiful piece