Inside a Bipolar Mind

Dynamic ecstasy shuttles me past the powdered moon
Only to plummet downward toward the sadness of the waking shore
Oh how I dream to float amidst the gentle atmosphere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Lopez Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Michele, congrats on being featured this week!
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May 16, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Michele, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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May 16, 2009 at 8:59 AM
A tough battle for some. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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May 15, 2009 at 6:16 AM
this piece is awesome. you are such a great poet. a well deserved feature.... keep writing. great you!. love Leke
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May 12, 2009 at 5:40 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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May 11, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Nice use of imagery, giving the reader a glimpse of what bipolar illness is like. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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May 11, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Beautiful three line poem. Congrats on an awesome featured write. Love, Shar
Austin Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 8:13 AM
With dynamic lift, how is it, Michele, up there around Pluto? Nice image, great imagination. Congrats. Love, daver
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May 11, 2009 at 7:21 AM
A tough ongoing battle, Michele. One of my all time favorites growing up battled it all her life, Connie Francis. Congratulations on "Inside a Bipolar Mind" being featured. Keep writing. Vince
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May 10, 2009 at 10:45 PM
My first time to read a poem in the form of a Sijo. I'll probably try this one. Thank you for sharing and congratulations my friend. Ernilando
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