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Inside a Bipolar Mind

Dynamic ecstasy shuttles me past the powdered moon Only to plummet downward toward the sadness of the waking shore Oh how I dream to float amidst the gentle atmosphere

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Abe Lopez

Date: 5/17/2009 2:02:00 PM

Michele, congrats on being featured this week!

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/16/2009 1:46:00 PM

Michele, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/16/2009 8:59:00 AM

A tough battle for some. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/15/2009 6:16:00 AM

this piece is awesome. you are such a great poet. a well deserved feature.... keep writing. great you!. love Leke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2009 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 5/11/2009 5:24:00 PM

Nice use of imagery, giving the reader a glimpse of what bipolar illness is like. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/11/2009 10:30:00 AM

Beautiful three line poem. Congrats on an awesome featured write. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 5/11/2009 8:13:00 AM

With dynamic lift, how is it, Michele, up there around Pluto? Nice image, great imagination. Congrats. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/11/2009 7:21:00 AM

A tough ongoing battle, Michele. One of my all time favorites growing up battled it all her life, Connie Francis. Congratulations on "Inside a Bipolar Mind" being featured. Keep writing. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/10/2009 10:45:00 PM

My first time to read a poem in the form of a Sijo. I'll probably try this one. Thank you for sharing and congratulations my friend. Ernilando