Inside

Inside every colour of skin
There flows a river of red.
Inside every river of thoughts
There binds a piece of mind.
Inside every piece of mind
There blows a stroke of soul.
Inside every stroke of soul
There falls the hands of God.



This is inspired from Shirley Hawkins poem Darkness and Light...
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/darkness_and_light_1258172


First Place in BRIAN'S SELECT 7,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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Wolf Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Bingo! This is lovingly penned, Jenish, richly deserving of its first prize! Congrats, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 12:23 AM
Thank you Gershon for your kind support..
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June 7, 2020 at 8:25 AM
This is beautiful Jenish. xomo
Somadas Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:58 PM
Thank you Pigeon..
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Great sentiments you expressed, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:58 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Bangalee Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:41 AM
inside one there existence another...great write
Somadas Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:57 PM
Yes.. Thank you Mahtab..
Trifiatis Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:31 AM
Inside every verse of yours the truth resonates dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx and blessings
Somadas Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:57 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..
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