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Insecure Attachment

quite tears  unnoticed
eggshells  crack under my feet
purple, black bruises

nagging guilt blinders 
never-ending  loneliness  
fantasy love  bond


6/15/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Day Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Insecurity can leave scares. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Interesting and wonderful words with this form. Congrats!
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 4:23 AM
Nicely written senryus on one sided love:)
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:41 PM
I enjoyed seeing these today, Eve.
A  Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Great write Eve... Skat
Muideen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:35 AM
You penned this with immense emotion. O so painful!........A.M.
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:08 AM
heart-wrenching and beautiful, eve... much enjoyed!..huggs
Fiery Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 3:05 AM
,,,never ending loneliness...I know what it is exactly...Excellent work my dear !!! A7 from me ~ Cheers ~ Red
Bankson Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Hate to love the line of eggshells..
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