Insanity

us deranged poets doubt the day, if sharp of mind is on display, or am i somewhere up the creek looking for to find the leak, me mentals gone astray... up the creek with a brain thats addled, calamity till im unsaddled, or freak so watch yer back, 4 gross attack , from some deranged of snyde, imagination is on track, sidestep ol suicide.... re "Edge of Insanity" good work Anthony Nutter! Don

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/20/2012 3:11:00 PM

Up the creek or not this is one I like a lot; Well done again old mate.."

Mad Hu

Date: 9/20/2012 1:01:00 AM

:)Gd,crazy write

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2012 3:25:00 PM

Have you gone mentals my friend? Ha ha, I doubt that for sure, you write too perfect of poetry to have gone mentally unstable Don! This one is again another awesome poem, I just love the, "...or am i somewhere up the creek..." line, a very common line put to good use with you mentals line! Is this just the loss of sanity, or is it true insanity? Whatever, this is an outstanding piece, Great Work!!