Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Inner Me

With a cup of raindrops I begin anew...
Lightly dropped on the floor, till my words grew...

Small petals peak out from under the light...
With only small sounds heard as we drift into night...

Morning arrives with a buffet of thoughts to write down...
They are all consumed slow as a daydream stays around...

The pages now covered in a poetic landscape outlined by the sea...
There I sit and gaze at a portrait of my inner me...

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Vassilis Comporozos July 30, 2012 at 7:27 AM Dear Michael, I've posted your poem on my short poetry blog, fryktorein.blogspot.gr. You can visit it and comment on other English poems!

Vassilis Comporozos July 19, 2012 at 4:40 AM it's kind of masterpiece, Michael. I wish I had more time now to read more of your poems! Can I post it on my poetical blog vcobor.blogspot.gr? (Both in Greek and English, you can comment on the English poems). I'll read more of your texts later. I'm glad I came across your poetry!

Gwendolen Song July 17, 2012 at 4:41 PM Nice portrait...now I have found out your secret to writing ggggrrrrreeeeaaaatttt poetry...gwendolen

Black Eyed Susan July 16, 2012 at 10:17 AM what an artistic write! from just a few raindrops...beautiful! Would it work for me too? I think my inner landscape would be much darker...lol. u look lovely :)

Sherese Gooden July 15, 2012 at 10:44 PM Michael, nice meeting the inner you. Enjoyed.

Wilma Neels July 15, 2012 at 12:41 PM I just love the ending MJF, this is a beauty.. I also want from the yummy food :D lol love & hugs CTH

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2012 at 4:40 PM Great work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2012 at 8:29 PM an adventure of writing enjoyment..that buffet of thoughts sounds so intriguing Michael luv.. so happy u have returned.. hope all is going well luv.. JG still dealing with headaches from concussion last week so good ole Ron typing once again till I am able to be on next week myself.. hugs and smoochies to u too.. xoxo

Kim Merryman July 13, 2012 at 5:32 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Michael. I love the images of "a cup of raindrops", "a buffet of thoughts" and "a portrait of my inner me" Great write. Love, Kim

Russell Sivey July 13, 2012 at 3:45 PM Wow, you sure can paint a beautiful picture with your words! I really enjoyed your creative poem! This enlightened me a lot this afternoon! I might just write a poem from the inspiration I gained from your write, thanks! Great Work!!