Harry Horsman Poet Senryu

Inner City

Ink without a pen
fluid flowing uncontrolled...
graffiti attack.

© Harry J Horsman  2012


foot note

in my opinion!
some graffiti i really like, and should be displayed
in art galleries, where the energy of the artist(s) 
are allowed to flourish..

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Bl Devnath February 20, 2012 at 2:17 PM Fantastic poem where I do feel something extra ordinary skill, loved and enjoyed. Thanks for reading my write, my sweet friend,bl

Elizabeth Wesley February 19, 2012 at 9:20 PM I've seen some graffiti that is wonderful to look at but I suppose it just isn't approprate everywhere and adds to the confused look some places have. You took a polite approach to the problem Harry.

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2012 at 7:12 PM Harry, of all of them, I think this is my favorite today! the first line so clever.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2012 at 10:09 PM Agreed, Harry! I don't deny a person's right to express him or herself but there are lawful ways to do it. Great write. Blessings,Rhonda

Russell Sivey February 18, 2012 at 11:59 AM You have written a most excellent write here Harry! I really enjoyed this fine artistic piece you have written my friend! I do enjoy graffiti as well when it is put it art galleries and not on train cars or building walls! I love you poem, it's a spectacular poem! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick February 18, 2012 at 8:03 AM Yes, there is untapped potential in the world..Sad..I agree some is not gang related but an untrained artist at work..Sara