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The rain ran up the window pane
The sun as black as night
The heat was so cold
The water was so tight.

Falling down rising into the sky
My tears of blood
My blood of ice....

Everything perfectly in its place
My heart is like a puzzle
A door without a key
I am so blind as I see.

I understand confusion
So simple yet so hard
Sinking while I ascend it all....

The silence is so loud
My breath will not come out
I’m sleeping wide awake
Standing still as I walk around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 7, 2012 at 12:19 AM
Heartfelt write Andrea...enjoy your poem very much ..thank you for your nice share...have a fabulous day..<3<3<3 SK
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November 6, 2012 at 7:14 PM
love this one very much!!
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