B. Maxine Revolution Poet Haiku

In-Lightenment

Your Enlightenment 
Please don’t be
frightened of it
Makes all knowledge
lit

Don’t ever forget
Always forgive and
let live
And be creative

Forevermore love
To be your own
peaceful dove
Sun you want above

Please commit to it
I found my
enlightenment 
Tell me where is
yours?

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Archana Kapoor Nagpal September 4, 2014 at 6:57 AM Congrats, dear!

Mark Trichet September 2, 2014 at 9:07 PM Oustanding collection BMR! Congrats, I too esp. liked the last...

Casarah Nance September 2, 2014 at 7:11 PM Awesome, I love the last one the best, posing the question, where as everyone finds enlightenment differently, yours is one of healing and loving, forgiving and peace. Well done and perfectly placed win ;)

Jan Allison September 2, 2014 at 3:06 PM congratulations on an excellent win for these excellent haiku Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 12:20 PM - Really beautiful, B.Maxine - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 9:41 AM Excellent piece - I love this great haiku! Congratulations on your win! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 2, 2014 at 6:55 AM Congrats on ur awesome win B max! Superb haikus!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 2, 2014 at 4:50 AM Visiting again to congratulate you on a great win, Maxine

Verlena S. Walker September 2, 2014 at 12:44 AM Well done Maxine. Congratulations on your win! Verlena

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2014 at 10:38 PM Congratulations to you - I enjoyed your words. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans September 1, 2014 at 8:59 PM Congratulations on a well done and meaningful Haiku.

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 19, 2014 at 11:15 PM Stackin up Haiku like Hi-choo. Sneezes Bless You! ~JSL Always a pleasure reading yir stuff!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 12, 2014 at 7:57 AM Nice images for power and prayer,