Inkless Poetry

I'd much rather be
Writing these words with my lips
I tremble and wait

21 May 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May 22, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Awesome piece. Really. ~;o)
F. Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 10:52 PM
Thanks!
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Location, location, location? Or perhaps position, position, position?! Well-done!
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May 22, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Thank you - is this maybe bending the haiku form too far?
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