Inkblot

inkblot black on a page lazy spot Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 6/27/2012 6:27:00 PM

where is the sage, has he forgot, shut up johnson , be your age, or not ....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2012 2:20:00 PM

Interesting work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sometimes if the pen gets lazy and lingers in one spot there is that great big spot of ink that tells on the person by saying the pen stopped here..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 6/27/2012 9:32:00 AM

love this deep piece, Russell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2012 8:18:00 AM

exactly my feelings for the past few days as being under the weather makes one feel like an inkdot Russell luv.. thannkxx..

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/27/2012 5:48:00 AM

Wow! Clever, imaginative, original, gets fixed in one's mind!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2012 11:43:00 PM

bingo, russell!... your imagery pulled me in with a stunning end line, " lazy spot"... ' a 'ku master you are!..:) huggs!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/26/2012 8:04:00 PM

never saw the point to those famous inkblots, but this one I like. Thanks for all of your comments on my poems. I am glad you enjoy reading them.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2012 7:46:00 PM

that is so cute, calling it a lazy spot!! (my vanity plate said Andie55 and I got lots of heads turned because my sports car was so hot looking). I felt really sad to give it up and get a stupid sedan. I actually feel like my life took a turn for the worse about the time I took those plates off my car. It is as if my body became the sedan and left behind the youthfulness of the sports car.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/26/2012 7:07:00 PM

I do love the haiku ;}