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the sun fades with a sigh she and I stand together a night of neon dreams I give her a Valentine she gives me her heart a friendship for ages becomes something more we tell each other I love you for the first time a breathless moment I whisper lest the moment be broken and she says she likes my poem and she likes something as simple as a bio about me desires to share beg another evening

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Date: 5/23/2020 11:14:00 PM
Very touching ~ love the simplicity and how romantic this is. Totally charming.
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Date: 2/21/2020 8:38:00 PM
If my husband were to even read a poem of mine, I would feel so thrilled. So THAT is very romantic, Mike.
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Date: 2/21/2020 6:05:00 PM
Hello Mike Bayles, I hope it works out for you. Enjoy your ev ening my friend.
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