Initiation

the sun fades with a sigh
she and I stand together
a night of neon dreams
I give her a Valentine
she gives me her heart
a friendship for ages
becomes something more
we tell each other
I love you
for the first time
a breathless moment
I whisper
lest the moment be broken
and she says she likes my poem
and she likes something
as simple as a bio about me
desires to share
beg another evening
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Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Very touching ~ love the simplicity and how romantic this is. Totally charming.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 8:38 PM
If my husband were to even read a poem of mine, I would feel so thrilled. So THAT is very romantic, Mike.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Hello Mike Bayles, I hope it works out for you. Enjoy your ev ening my friend.
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