Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

In-Human

IN-HUMAN
    Veins with same red blood
  Hearts with hatred and disdain
      How long will it go?
					

             OF- FENCE
        Nature, His portrait!
   Fence, a naughty child’s doodle!
        Needs an eraser. 


          RE-CREATION
       Magnificent blooms,
     Bliss of His smart creation,
         To recreate us.

         Date: 03-06-2020

Contest: Fresh Traditional Haiku 5-7-5
Judged on: 05/06/2020
Sponsored by: JCB Burl
winner: placed 2nd

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L. J. Carber June 7, 2020 at 10:50 AM Complex and interesting--congrats on your win Patri Venkata Ramana June 8, 2020 at 8:24 AM Thanks for your appreciation.

JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 9:18 AM Deeply woven thoughts ! Congrats. Patri Venkata Ramana June 8, 2020 at 8:22 AM your compliments boosted my spirits. Thanks a lot!

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 11:12 AM Your words give a deep message. Congratulations on your win :) Patri Venkata Ramana June 8, 2020 at 8:20 AM Thanks for your compliments