Inheritance

My mother didn’t cook too well
Although she fed us fine.
Her house was not immaculate,
Much messier than mine.

She didn’t knit, crochet or quilt
But she was great at sports;
She swam and bowled and tennised
Really well, by all reports.

And oh, could she dance up a storm!
She crossword-puzzled, too.
When things were good or bad for me,
Somehow, she always knew.

She passed down many of her traits
But no, I cannot dance
And barely swim but I can bowl,
Though rarely have the chance.

I do the crossword every day
But like her, hate to cook.
While she escaped in naps,
I disappear inside a book.

We all have inclinations
That our parents have bestowed,
Though babies make us wonder
What is waiting down the road.

We hope that they’ll inherit
Just those qualities we’d pick
But we have no way of knowing
What will fade and what will stick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duggan Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Very good write Ilene, I really can't see anything of me in my kids, the youngest looks like me but everything else is like his Dad, I take after my dad as he was a mechanic and could put his hands to anything, I am a bit like that, anyway that doesn't alter the fact that you have written a great poem here, take care......Vera..........
Callus Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:02 PM
We all inherit some things from our parents; usually they mention the good traits...the bad ones they blame somebody else for them:) A very enjoyable poem, Ilene! // paul
Amadore Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:55 AM
A very enjoyable read, giving us an insight into your early years and your present....homey and well done.
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:37 PM
simply delightful write - I can see small traits of me in my son - just hope its all the good stuff LOL. its a 7 from me Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx
Gibson Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Ilene, this is beautiful, charming and touching all at the same time. I enjoyed reading it this evening.
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Ileen this is fabulous ....I see much of me in all my children.... My youngest son is almost a spitting image of me when I was 12....love it...to my favs as well....hugs Tim
Nance Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:48 PM
That is great! I see so much of myself in my daughter now, and when I see the negative qualities it scares me a little, but only time will tell. We are our parents children. I love your poem so much I am rating 7 and adding it to my favs, it was very cool to read :)
Bauer Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:53 PM
thank you, casarah! my first grandson is about to have his first birthday party and i look at him and wonder which of my son's qualitites he's inherited. he's really smart (do all grandmothers think this?) but otherwise, it's too soon to tell...
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