Inhaling the Stars

hyperventilate 
a bag filled with outer space
inhaling the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Wow! Powerful image, Anthony. Awesome haiku! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Beautiful Haiku. Love it. Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 9:56 AM
great imagination to make this great haiku
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